Your transformation of the mass, structure and shape of a shoe box into a willow tree is very creative and successful. The box completely disappeared and become a very dynamic and interesting piece. Interesting exploration of colors.
Even though you have include several steps of your deconstructing and reconstructing process, the visual narrative appears confusing.¬ Please try to organize images and sketches in chronological order. From first images to appear on the top of posting and progressing in the way you are scrolling down. Also turn 90 degree the vertical images, as needed. That would make narrative more clear to the blog viewers.
Your transformation of the mass, structure and shape of a shoe box into a willow tree is very creative and successful. The box completely disappeared and become a very dynamic and interesting piece. Interesting exploration of colors.
ReplyDeleteEven though you have include several steps of your deconstructing and reconstructing process, the visual narrative appears confusing.¬
Please try to organize images and sketches in chronological order. From first images to appear on the top of posting and progressing in the way you are scrolling down. Also turn 90 degree the vertical images, as needed. That would make narrative more clear to the blog viewers.
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